Personally, I think there is too much dead space, particularly in the top left corner, to have the title overlap with the girl so much. Particularly, something about the letters sitting over top her shoulder doesn't seem right. I keep looking at the pictures trying to figure out a way to arrange them so that there is still space for the letters, but so far I've got nothing.
I found that I agreed with her assessment and after much playing around with the two photographs in question, I thought maybe the cover would work with just the girl. Game. Set. Match. after all is told solely from the female point of view.
So here's what I came up with:
What do you guys think? Better? Worse? Meh?
Let me know!